Let's Read Awful AB Fan Fiction

[Alittleacorn]

^_^ I'm glad you're okay for me to be honest, I wish I could be that blunt with every fanfic I read. But what's more important, a person's feelings or being honest? =( I hate lying, but then I hate saying things that might upset the writer, more so if they're only in their teens.

I'd love to post some of my old work, I did this Kingdom Hearts story when I was 15 with Sora being this heartless and Kairi a blind girl (gawd some of the material in that was terrible!) but, I deleted that years ago. For good reason too, shmoo! >.<;

That Publisher sounds mean XD

[Fauna]

It's my theory that somebody needs to break it to a bad writer that they are bad, hopefully giving them specific areas to improve on, otherwise they'll be sitting in a naiive bubble for a long time.

Also! I just hit a gold mine of crap (that's the weirdest way I could have put it). There's a guy on FF.net called MonkayFun who wrote gobs of strange, strange AB fan fictions at least five years ago. I'm writing from school and FF.net is blocked here, so when I get home, I'll show you guys "Astro and Armtrats". That's probably spelt wrong, but I swear, the author spells it four different ways over the course of three pages.


EDIT: I gathered my reaction to my story! It's something like looking at my hands and bawling, "HOW DID I CREATE THISSS?!"

[F-Man]

But Astro's mom is based on Tobio's dead mom... Tenma stole her during her creation to create the face or something like that. Just saying.

[Astronomical girl]

either way fan fiction is fun to read and write ,doesn't have to be accurate or anything just fan fantasy

[Androids101]

Its only limited by your imagination

[Astronomical girl]

yeah,Fauna's could have used some editing and refining and it would be a great story

PS,Androids,great sigggy

[Androids101]

Thanks

(I don't write stories as much as I used to now...)

[Astronomical girl]

why not?

[Androids101]

Something to do with the lack of ideas

[Astronomical girl]

would you like some idea ?