Battle of Steel Island: Alternate Ending

[Novacain]

No biggie, just thought it was interesting. I think work is a little more important than entertaining some members on a forum!

[Astro Boy2866]

I would rather entertain members than do schoolwork, but that's not going to get me into Stanford or UCLA

[the 鉄腕アトム fan]

When are you going to do part 2 Astro Boy2866?

[Novacain]

Poor Astro Boy 2866, started somethin' he couldn't finish and now it keeps coming back to kick him in the tushy

[the 鉄腕アトム fan]

Lol

[Astro Forever]

I would rather entertain members than do schoolwork, but that's not going to get me into Stanford or UCLA

You have your priorities all wrong!

I'm totally kidding, of course. I wish you the best of luck; good for you if you can manage to stay off the computer despite the temptation. The semester must come close to an end? Perhaps he'll have a bit more time in the summer.

[the 鉄腕アトム fan]

i'm randomly going to finish the story PART 2

The blast hit me square in the chest as I felt a wave of electricity pass through my entire body. I cried out in pain and then everything went black.

Then i heard a soft voice in my head saying "Don't be afraid, little one"
"W-w-who are you?"
"I am the Phoenix, my people call me FireBird"
I suddenly remembered something, Rock, he wanted to bring back the Moon Tower onto Earth and to use it's power for EVIL!
"What do you want from me?" I said trying not to sound scared.
"You have done your deeds to the world and you may have it back"
"Have what back" I say
"Another chance to live"
"But...B-b-b-but i got deactivated" I said
"And destroyed!" the Phoenix said calmly to me
"WHAT" I shouted at the top of my voice hmy:
"It's true, when you got deactivated all sorts of problems happened, the professer wanted to bring you back but you had been destroyed"
"And what shall i do?"
"I am going to send you back in time to the very moment when you killed the human, and you will be the only one who rememberd what had happened and what will happen, do you understand, Astro?" the Phoenix looked at me I nodded.
Then suddenly colours went whizing all around me.
Drake said something into his monitor and held up something saying, “Astro, this will blow you away.”...

to be continued...

[Gotta Love ASTRO BOY]

Ooohhh awesome the Phoenix saved Astro

[Astro Boy2866]

i'm randomly going to finish the story PART 2

The blast hit me square in the chest as I felt a wave of electricity pass through my entire body. I cried out in pain and then everything went black.

Then i heard a soft voice in my head saying "Don't be afraid, little one"
"W-w-who are you?"
"I am the Phoenix, my people call me FireBird"
I suddenly remembered something, Rock, he wanted to bring back the Moon Tower onto Earth and to use it's power for EVIL!
"What do you want from me?" I said trying not to sound scared.
"You have done your deeds to the world and you may have it back"
"Have what back" I say
"Another chance to live"
"But...B-b-b-but i got deactivated" I said
"And destroyed!" the Phoenix said calmly to me
"WHAT" I shouted at the top of my voice hmy:
"It's true, when you got deactivated all sorts of problems happened, the professer wanted to bring you back but you had been destroyed"
"And what shall i do?"
"I am going to send you back in time to the very moment when you killed the human, and you will be the only one who rememberd what had happened and what will happen, do you understand, Astro?" the Phoenix looked at me I nodded.
Then suddenly colours went whizing all around me.
Drake said something into his monitor and held up something saying, “Astro, this will blow you away.”...

to be continued...

Nice, not exactly what I was going to do, but it was pretty good nevertheless. I will continue the actual story over the summer break.

Poor Astro Boy 2866, started somethin' he couldn't finish and now it keeps coming back to kick him in the tushy

I know :d oh:, but I will finish it one day (hopefully)

[the 鉄腕アトム fan]

will you really finish it?