Battle of Steel Island: Alternate Ending

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Postby Androids101 » 13 years ago

Now thats an idea, Astro has a data corruption, and then he has to be rebooted and then learn everything all over again
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Postby Astro Boy2866 » 13 years ago

Well, I'm pretty sure the most advanced robot in the world would have the most advanced virus protection program in the world, but data corruption would be a different story.


The edited last sentence of chapter 1 would be from this:
I tried to react by dodging the blast, but I wasn’t quick enough. The blast hit me square in the chest as I felt a wave of electricity pass through my entire body. I cried out in pain and then everything went black.


To this:
I tried to react by dodging the blast, but I wasn’t quick enough. The blast hit me square in the chest as I felt a wave of electricity pass through my entire body. I cried out in pain as I felt my energy depleting, then everything went black.

Not much of a change, but it makes a big difference on how chapter 2 would start ;)

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Postby Astronomical girl » 13 years ago

duuuude :eeK i'm drooling in excitment :lol: :w00tL
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Postby AprilSeven » 13 years ago

Too bad O'Shay didn't just go to a keyboard and do a quick CTR ALT DELETE .. .

and then you see the little microsoft windows emblem appear in both Astro's eyes....

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Postby diehard67 » 13 years ago

:sick: errp

ick astro powered by windows, no good can come of this.

that must be why he killed drake, the windows driver for his targiting system had a bug and he miss amed.
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Postby Dr. Jerk » 13 years ago

"diehard67" wrote: :sick: errp

ick astro powered by windows, no good can come of this.

that must be why he killed drake, the windows driver for his targiting system had a bug and he miss amed.


Reminds me of one of the pictures in the Photoshop the Picture game, where someone put the blue screen of death inside the panel in Astro's chest.

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Postby AprilSeven » 13 years ago

Sorry -- didn't mean to make you sick (I ain't no big Micros&^# fan either)!

i remember that Photoshop image too with the blue screen!! What a RIOT!!

I think Astro is more of a Linux man, myself!

Hey image a crew of developers working for Tenma, writing aps for Astro !! XD That should be in the next anime installment -- Elefun brings him in for period updates and new aps "Look Astro, this new ap will give you the ability to smell where people have been!"

oh, yeah -- just like James Bond.
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Postby Androids101 » 13 years ago

O'Shay: Look Astro, this new app will allow you to browse the internet!

Astro: Awesome! I've always wanted to go on Astro Boy Online Forums!

*types it in*

404 PAGE NOT FOUND

Astro: What!? There must be some mistake! O'Shay, your app is not functioning! I know that thanks to the excellent members on there, Astro Boy online will be retained forever!

O'Shay: If it was any other site it must be something else, but since its Astro Boy Online I know that its my app thats the problem.
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Postby Astro Boy2866 » 13 years ago

I can't. I'm way too busy and the only mostly free day that I have is Sunday, but if I did it every Sunday, it would take me forever to finish it. I'll try to get it going again, but I'll have to work my schedule around it so I can try to leave some time for it.
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