Astro's thoughts - A poem

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Astro's thoughts - A poem

Postby Bakabits » 13 years ago

This was written as if from Astro's POV. It is supposed to be a letter from him to his fans. ENJOY! :)

Astro’s Thoughts

This life of mine
Slumbers in my spine.

While you are impressed
I am depressed.

While you slumber
I wonder
Why do humans fail to understand
The pain I withstand?

I feel like an outcast
Always downcast.

While we fight
I see a light
Which gives me hope
While I climb the rope
To nowhere.

So I continue to find
Reasons to still be kind
Like my friends’
Willingness to cleanse
The amount of hate
In this strait.

While you slumber
I will ALWAYS wonder
Why do human’s fail to understand
The pain I withstand?

My mind is blank
But my heart is a bank
Holding many dear
But nothing clear.
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Postby Astro Boy2866 » 13 years ago

Good job :)
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Postby InsaneAstroBoyLover » 13 years ago

OHHOHO! THAT'S AWESOME!!!! Keep it up!

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Postby avatargirl » 13 years ago

hi- hugs THANKS ASTROMARS137- HOPE WE WILL always be friends- love you for being a friend- thanks so much- agree with ASTRO BOY 2866 and INSANEASTROBOYLOVER

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Postby AprilSeven » 13 years ago

Wow, that expresses very poignantly how I imagine his thoughts of humanity. Beautiful job.
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Postby Bakabits » 13 years ago

lol believe it or not this took me only 5 min to write. :lol: the idea came into my head and i said "omg i have to write this before i forget!" I annoyed some people on the game i was playing because i quit but life is not perfect you know. :p The poem was based off of the 03 astro BTW.
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Postby Androids101 » 13 years ago

I'm impressed, and I'm sure Astro would be to ;)
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Postby Gotta Love ASTRO BOY » 13 years ago

oohhh poor astro wahhh

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Postby astrogirl0708 » 13 years ago

:cry: awww that is the cutest poem ever!!!!!!!
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Postby astrogirl0708 » 13 years ago

so the 03 astro is from 2009?
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