Saving Luna

[ASTRO BOY IS AWESOME!]

Chapter One
Why am I sitting in a chair hands tied with blood dripping down my face? Well it started maybe 48 hours ago. Standing outside school waiting for my brother Astro
“Astro!” I said “ What do you need Luna?” Astro replied “Well I need a faster brother, catch me if you can!” I yelled as I ran home.
“Ok but don’t be upset if you get beaten!” Then I stopped because he passed me on his rocket jets “Oh no fair!” I yelled. So knowing that Astro would be me I just started to walk home. Then suddenly a bag covered me and I was tipped upside down all I could think was to yell ‘ASTRO!’ I tried to yell but a gag was covering my mouth. I had know idea what to do I was trying to think, that’s when it all went dark.

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*claps* Very good

[ASTRO BOY IS AWESOME!]

thanx it's my first try to write a story i'm working on chapter 2

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First try? No way hmy: your so good though

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yepp first try unless you count a knockoff of the 'wizard of oz' and episode 43 in 1980s version

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Wow your good

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not really i got both Fs on those for grades

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hmy: maybe you just need proper insperation

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ya i guess so

[the 鉄腕アトム fan]

Nice story Abio