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Posted: Wed Jun 22, 2016 1:27 pm
by AprilSeven
Secrets -- I am REALLY EXCITED to see/read your fanfic - and I feel your design of Astro/Toby and others are PERFECT. They're contemporary, without being "quirky for the sake of being quirky"

You capture expressions phenomenally well - NOT an easy thing to do -- but something that Tezuka did very well. I'm going to call it the "Disney factor."

I also like Astro portrayed as slightly older because it strengthens the "believe-ability" of his being intellectually mature (not just a little boy with super-powers).

I'm sorry I haven't responded sooner to your work -- but want you to know, I can't wait to see any posts you make here.

BTW - do you use any kind of drawing/manga program to do these? They look like they've been drawn freehand. Keep up the good work!

Posted: Wed Jun 22, 2016 6:15 pm
by Secretsivekept
"AprilSeven" wrote:Secrets -- I am REALLY EXCITED to see/read your fanfic - and I feel your design of Astro/Toby and others are PERFECT. They're contemporary, without being "quirky for the sake of being quirky"

You capture expressions phenomenally well - NOT an easy thing to do -- but something that Tezuka did very well. I'm going to call it the "Disney factor."

I also like Astro portrayed as slightly older because it strengthens the "believe-ability" of his being intellectually mature (not just a little boy with super-powers).

I'm sorry I haven't responded sooner to your work -- but want you to know, I can't wait to see any posts you make here.

BTW - do you use any kind of drawing/manga program to do these? They look like they've been drawn freehand. Keep up the good work!



Thank you so much!! :wub: I have been influenced by Disney a lot so that could be why, haha XD

I sketched this on my tablet using a program called Clip Studio Paint! :) :D

Posted: Wed Jun 22, 2016 6:24 pm
by Secretsivekept
I thought I'd upload some sketches of Toby and Zoran that I did on paper (and combined together on the computer :D )

I think I quite haven't mastered Toby's face, he's supposed to be 14 in the story but I keep making his face too long. The first page (the one where he's holding Zoran) is more of my idea for Toby's look.... idk. These are just a bunch of sketches anyway *shrug*

(and yes, the parrot on the bottom of the second picture is Houdini, Zoran's bird pet. He's a parrot ^u^ )

Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2016 4:17 am
by Shiyonasan
Yet another great couple of fan art pieces. I like your interpretation of Tobio and Uran, but especially Uran; you captured her personality well.

You're also very good at drawing facial expressions. Uran's expression in the sketch of her sitting on Tobio's shoulders is excellent and amusing. :lol:

Since I've commented on it before, I might as well say this this time: I think you drew both characters appropriate to their ages this time. I've said before that you tend to draw Atom a little older than you intend to, but Tobio looks like a 14 year old kid here, and Uran looks like her age (my fan canon is that Uran is created to look about 7 or 8 years old in the manga and anime).

Anyway, it seems I tend to comment a lot in this thread, but your artwork continues to be awesome! Keep up the good work! :D

Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2016 7:36 pm
by Secretsivekept
another drawing for the Miraculous AU :D

Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2016 3:49 am
by Secretsivekept
Some more astro boy art :D The second one is a Wall-E AU that I just thought was cute X33 (yes I included Nuka/Niki, she needs more love ;3; )

Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2016 4:07 am
by Shiyonasan
Oh, LAB Astro and his touching problem... :lol:

Nice work as always! The last three drawings you posted are great!

I've got a request: could you try drawing Jetter Mars? Not sure if you've drawn him already, but I'd like to see him in your style. :)

Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2016 2:14 pm
by Tetsuwan Penguin
"Secretsivekept" wrote:Some more astro boy art :D The second one is a Wall-E AU that I just thought was cute X33 (yes I included Nuka/Niki, she needs more love ;3; )


Atom as Wall-E and Niki as Eve. I like that.

I had started to write a Wall-E / Astro crossover story a while back, but never got too far with it. Uran would have been in Eve's part, and Atlas in the 'auto pilot' part.

Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2016 1:13 am
by Secretsivekept
Vwalah! A Jetter Mars has appeared XDD He's so cute, I need to draw him more often.

And yes, I gave him freckles because I felt like it XD

Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2016 2:04 am
by Shiyonasan
Good job! The freckles are a nice addition. :D

If you want to draw Jetter Mars more often, feel free to! I think there's quite a few members on here who would love to see it. I wouldn't mind seeing other Jetter Mars characters as well. :)